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Slowly smoldering smoke,
Rises out of old cinders.
Whisps of a starting flame,
My breath it hinders.

Catching on quickly,
Warm fingers reaching out.
Caressing my face seductively,
I lean in as passion flames dance about.

Dissatisfied, I instigate the flame,
Higher now, heat intensifying.
Mesmorized, can't look away,
From the blazing inferno that's so satisfying.

Consuming me entirely,
Flaming tongues cover every part.
Ecstasy in every nerve,
Burning sweetly, engulfing my heart.

Screaming in pain and pleasure,
Awaiting a cooling rain.
Just basking in the glow now,
I'll never be the same...
©2008-2009 ~GypsyBlaze
:icongypsyblaze:

Author's Comments

This came from nickgmonster calling me a pyro...yup that's all it took...

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:iconnickgmonster:
:wow: ^^;
Whoa! Love the cadence! And the innuendo..the use of words...how you tweaked the message...
Beautiful.

:faint:

your writing really had meat - if that makes sense...
The only thing i can think of is your honing your craft.....I enjoyed this more than those before.

--

Love never dies a natural death. It dies because we don't know how to replenish it's source. It dies of blindness and errors and betrayals. It dies of illness and wounds; it dies of weariness, of witherings, of tarnishings.

Anais Nin
:iconbethann687:
This is amazing... totally amazing... I was so drawn in to the poem and the flow... definitely my fav!!!

--
"For I know the plans I have for you," declares the Lord "plans to prosper you and not to harm you, plans to give you hope and a future."
~Jeremiah 29:11

"I'm waiting, even tho its painful."
~John Waller
:icongypsyblaze:
thanx :blushes:

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"Dragon's power is mine:
To rise up roaring,
To fly above sorrow,
To see treasure gleaming."
~Unknown
:icongypsyblaze:
Thank you so much for the inspiration, the fav, and the wonderful and honest comments :blushes: :blowskiss: :blushes:

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"Dragon's power is mine:
To rise up roaring,
To fly above sorrow,
To see treasure gleaming."
~Unknown
:iconwaterearthgoddess:
Why am I not surprised? ;) It really is good, I am just teasing. ;)

--
You can't get a cup of tea big enough or a long enough book to satisfy me.
~CS Lewis
:icongypsyblaze:
lol you knew something fire related would be in my gallery sooner or later...blame nickgmonster he called me a pyro lol

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"Dragon's power is mine:
To rise up roaring,
To fly above sorrow,
To see treasure gleaming."
~Unknown
:iconbellaezrebetfang:
Good job describing it. :flame: I love fire O_____o

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"God, we're off the rails,
now they drag me off in pieces." - elle-sophicles
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"I will make pilgrims of my fingers,"
- ScarlettLetters :iconscarlettletters:
:iconwaterearthgoddess:
but of course. ;)



and I do blame him. many inspirations come from the great nickgmonster. ;)

--
You can't get a cup of tea big enough or a long enough book to satisfy me.
~CS Lewis

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